Please make sure that you describe how each attribute is valued by employers. A better form of words might be - "This attribute/attitude is valued by employers because..." Then explain how an employee with that attribute/attitude is useful to employers.Try to keep more closely to the point in the way you write.
This work meets P1 - "explain the personal attributes valued by employers".
Please make sure that you describe how each attribute is valued by employers. A better form of words might be -
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Try to keep more closely to the point in the way you write.
This work meets P1 - "explain the personal attributes valued by employers".
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